I look within.. to find my light
I look without.. to heed me
I fail to know, the truth of thy light
But you never fail to read me
Eons have passed since I last heard you clear and unperturbed
But I am of faith.. that there awaits me a day.. in which I witness you .. in all you’re radiance.. and I know that.. It is there that I’ll choose to stay!
I look without.. to heed me
I fail to know, the truth of thy light
But you never fail to read me
Eons have passed since I last heard you clear and unperturbed
But I am of faith.. that there awaits me a day.. in which I witness you .. in all you’re radiance.. and I know that.. It is there that I’ll choose to stay!
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Re: introspection
Sat, May 12, 2007 - 2:04 PMHopeful and sweet, my only question is the format of the lines; dropping down rather than all the ellipses might work nicely.
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Re: introspection
Wed, May 16, 2007 - 11:46 PM1) Too much abstraction, not enough images.
2) Why are you using the archaic "thy"?
3) your, not you're (why not "thy" here).
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Re: introspection
Wed, May 16, 2007 - 11:59 PMhey.... will fix the spelling...
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