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Freedom topic posted Mon, May 28, 2007 - 10:35 PM by Unsubscribed

I'm sick and tired of the reflexes of the animal machine
Robotic games going nowhere
There's no space to move
Or Think independent thoughts
Nothing but your monkey fiending

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Re: Freedom

Wed, May 30, 2007 - 6:22 AM

Why is it I'm imagining you playing bongo drums as you read this?

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robert

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Re: Freedom

Tue, June 5, 2007 - 12:37 AM

makes me want to run naked through forest trails

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